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| Subject 33 |
hello |
| Date |
November 28, 2007, 5:15 am |
| Comment |
hello...haven't seen u for a long time!!
r u in UK now?
i saw ur messege,r u going to Liverpool?
wow...there is so cold!
after my trip,i have been sick until now@@
cold+windy+rainning...
but...the view there is nice,the city isn't busy,like country-side of London though!
enjoy it! |
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| Subject 30 |
FYI.....Tips |
| Date |
November 20, 2007, 1:03 pm |
| Comment |
之..乎..者..也..該..將..其.. 少用文言
該/其 ==> 那個/他/那位 etc
將 ==> 會/把
Don't translate English "A" or "The" into "一" in Chinese.
這一件事 ==> 這件事
Proper use of "的""得"
Doing that, you will at least get a B+ for whatever you wrote!!
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| Author reply |
Appreciate it.
You want me to do the same for your English? |
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